Anyone wanna rephrase these for me? :)

[MMATycoon]

WE HAVE ENOUGH NOW, THANKS GUYS!

 

This is a job I find super boring but you might like it. I have been writing some commentary for failed counters. I've done fighter A and need to rewrite the same thing i different language for fighter B. If you guys fancy rephrasing the following, that'd be great

 

Please keep the following format so I can just copy and paste it into the fight engine. I have it set up so we have "went to throw it but didn't" and "threw the counter but it didn't connect". The latter will show up in the stats as an attempted attack but the first type doesn't.

 

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." was looking to counter that move with a punch but didn't quite pull the trigger.";
$commentary .= "
It looked like ".$fighterA." wanted to counter with a hook but didn't fully commit.";

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." swung with a counter right hand that didn't connect.";

$commentary .= "
An attempted straight right counter from ".$fighterA." misses the target.";

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." is looking to counter punch.";
$commentary .= "
A little feinted left hand from ".$fighterA." on the counter but he doesn't commit to it.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." throwing a counter right hand but ".$fighterB." manages to avoid it.";

 

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." appears to be looking for a counter punch to the body.";
$commentary .= "
It looked like ".$fighterA." was trying to counter with a body shot coming off that last attack from ".$fighterB.".";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." swung with a counter punch to the body but it didn't connect.";
$commentary .= "
A quick step to the side and ".$fighterA." tries to counter with a shot to the body but it doesn't connect.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." is looking to counter with a shot to the body.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." was looking to counter that last move with a shot to the body but he didn't commit.";
$commentary .= "
A counter left hand to the body from ".$fighterA." misses its target.";

 

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." appears to be looking for a big counter.";
$commentary .= "
It looked like ".$fighterA." was looking amped, ready to throw a big counter but didn't commit.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." is looking for a counter combo.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." seem to be loading up, looking for a big counter.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." went nuts there looking for a big combo counter but none of the flurry connected.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." throws a big counter combination but ".$fighterB." scrambles out of danger and avoids any damage.";
$commentary .= "
As ".$fighterB." looks to move away, ".$fighterA." throws a big counter combo bu ".$fighterB." just gets out of the way.";

 

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." looked to counter with a high kick but didn't commit.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." lifts his leg as if looking to counter with a high kick.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." thinks about countering with a head kick.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." is looking to counter with head kicks.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." throws a counter high kick but ".$fighterB." was just alert enough to avoid it.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterB." just manages to avoid a counter high kick from".$fighterB.".";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." throws a quick counter head kick but ".$fighterB." was just out of range.";

 

 

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." feinted there with a counter leg kick.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." looked to counter that last move with a leg kick but didn't pull the trigger.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." half committed to a counter leg kick.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." appeared to be looking to counter that last move with a leg kick.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." tried to counter with a leg kick but ".$fighterB." avoided it.";
$commentary .= "
As ".$fighterB." backs away, ".$fighterA." returns fire with a leg kick that just misses.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." fires out a quick counter leg kick but ".$fighterB." just manages to avoid it.";

 

 

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." is looking to counter with a body kick.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." jinks towards his opponent looking like he wants to counter with a mid kick but doesn't commit.";
$commentary .= "
It appears ".$fighterA." was looking to counter with a kick there.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." thinks about countering with a body kick.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." quickly followed up with a counter body kick but doesn't connect.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterB." throws a quick counter kick to the body but ".$fighterB." avoids it.";
$commentary .= "
And ".$fighterA." counters with a quick kick to the body but ".$fighterB." blocks it.";

 

 

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." seemed to be looking to counter by closing the distance.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." is looking to counter the offense by ".$fighterB." and move into the clinch.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." wants to take advantage of his opponent's missed offense by moving into the clinch.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." is trying to close the distance and clinch up, after that failed offence from ".$fighterB.".";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." tries to counter by moving into the clinch but ".$fighterB." manages to circle out of the way.";
$commentary .= "
As ".$fighterB." tries to get set, ".$fighterA." tries to push him back and clinch up but ".$fighterB." manages to avoid the attempt.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." tries to counter by clinching up but ".$fighterB." breaks away and moves out of range.";

 

 

$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." feinted with a counter takedown.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." appears to be looking for a counter takedown.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." changes levels looking for a counter takedown but doesn't commit.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." half commits to a counter takedown before pushing away, out of range.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." drops down looking for a counter takedown but ".$fighterB." sprawls and moves away.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." tries to counter with a takedown but ".$fighterB." is quick to defend against it.";
$commentary .= "
".$fighterA." attempts a counter takedown but ".$fighterB." avoids it well and moves away.";

[Viking]

Cool. I will get on it tonight. Im sure many people will enjoy doing this.

[MMATycoon]

the more we get the better.

[Guest]

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." was looking to counter that move with a punch but didn't quite pull the trigger.";and .$fighterB. "takes advantage and throws a side kick to ribs"
$commentary .= "<br/>"It looked like ".$fighterA." wanted to counter with a hook but didn't fully commit.";and "so he throws a left hook to the gut."

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." swung with a counter right hand that didn't connect.";and "he looks a little tired from the that last attempt."

$commentary .= "<br/>An attempted straight right counter from ".$fighterA." misses the target.";and "he gets countered by a strong hook to the jaw."

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." is looking to counter punch.";and "he to slow, hes one his back. Great takedown by .$fighterB."
$commentary .= "<br/> A little feinted left hand from ".$fighterA." on the counter but he doesn't commit to it.";and "he seems a little gun shy, like a school boy with his girlfriend for the first time."
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." throwing a counter right hand but ".$fighterB." manages to avoid it.";and "and .$fighterB. taunts him for the miss and the crowd is loving it!"

[Guest]

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." appears to be looking for a big counter.";and "he throws a leaping hook to the temple"
$commentary .= "<br/>It looked like ".$fighterA." was looking amped, ready to throw a big counter but didn't commit.";and "he got jabbed on the eye socket in the process."
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." is looking for a counter combo.";and "chin, chin and body. Nice combo!"
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." seem to be loading up, looking for a big counter.";and "unleashes a uppercut and hits his target"
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." went nuts there looking for a big combo counter but none of the flurry connected.";and "that took a lot of energy out of him"
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." throws a big counter combination but ".$fighterB." scrambles out of danger and avoids any damage.";and ".$fighterB throws a hook kick that glances"
$commentary .= "<br/> As ".$fighterB." looks to move away, ".$fighterA." throws a big counter combo bu ".$fighterB." just gets out of the way.";and ".$fighterA is losing confidence"

[tp61503]

I would love to but it would take me forever since I gave no PC now

[edgehead]

That's one of the biggest things I love about this game how everyone is willing to come together to help progress the game, It's a shame that the amount of active players has gone down so much since I last played hopefully we can pick it up somehow.

[Victorio]

So bad I know nothing about programming...

[MMATycoon]

Hometown, you're adding an extra line on the end, which is not gunna work... I just need the format of the original lines. The commentary line is for the counter attempt only, which can come off any move type, not just one specific move following another.

[Guest]

Hometown, you're adding an extra line on the end, which is not gunna work... I just need the format of the original lines. The commentary line is for the counter attempt only, which can come off any move type, not just one specific move following another.

 

damn and i thought i was being clever

[MMATycoon]

Anyone wanna have a go? Doesn't need to be all of it, just a few is better than nothing

[Guest]

Anyone wanna have a go? Doesn't need to be all of it, just a few is better than nothing

 

i will just a bit busy

[MMATycoon]

cheers bud

[MMATycoon]

Pretty please?

 

Don't worry about the format in terms of coding anymore - just gimme a slight rephrasing of the commentary.

[Bwang]

First group:

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looked like he wanted to counter with a punch but just didn't throw it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>It seemed like ".$fighterB." was going to counter with the hook but didn't fully commit to it.";

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." swings away with a counter right hand but no contact made.";

$commentary .= "<br/>And an attempted straight right on the counter from ".$fighterB."! But no joy.";

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looks like he wants to counter punch here.";
$commentary .= "<br/> A little jabbing left from ".$fighterB." on the counter but it doesn't find it's target.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." throws out a counter right but ".$fighterA." avoids it with no problem.";

(changed A and B around. maybe that's being too clever..)

[Bwang]

Second group:

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." appears to be waiting to throw a counter punch to the body.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is clearly trying to counter these attacks from ".$fighterA." with a body shot.";

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." let fly with a counter punch to the body but it didn't land.";
$commentary .= "<br/>A nice side step and ".$fighterB." releases a counter shot to the body, but it doesn't find it's home.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." now looks to counter with a shot at the body.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." doesn't fully commit to the body shot counter.";
$commentary .= "<br/> A countering left hand to the body from ".$fighterB." misses.";

[Skap]

$commentary .= "<br/>It looked like ".$fighterA." was looking amped, ready to throw a big counter but didn't commit.";

$commentary .= "<br/>looked like ".$ fighterA." was loading upbut didnt pull the trigger.

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." went nuts there looking for a big combo counter but none of the flurry connected.";

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." went ape there trying for a counter combo but came up empty.";

 

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." throws a big counter combination but ".$fighterB." scrambles out of danger and avoids any damage.";

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." throws a big counter combination but ".$fighterB." is able to slip the attack avoiding any damage."

 

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/> As ".$fighterB." looks to move away, ".$fighterA." throws a big counter combo but ".$fighterB." just gets out of the way.";

$commentary .= "<br/> While ".$fighterB." is looking to keep his distance, ".$fighterA." throws a big counter combo but ".$fighterB." is able to slip the attack.";

 

 

 

Mehh, I tried =/

[Bwang]

Third group:

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is looking for the big counter here.";
$commentary .= "<br/>Despite the aggression on ".$fighterB."'s face he doesn't fully commit to the counter.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." throws a counter combo.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is loading up here, looking for a big counter of his own.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." lets it all go there with a big combo counter but none of the punches connected.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." unleashes a big counter combination but ".$fighterA." bobs and weaves and avoids any damage.";
$commentary .= "<br/> As ".$fighterA." backs off ".$fighterB." throws a huge counter combo but ".$fighterA." manages to avoid it all.";

[Bwang]

Forth group:

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looks like he wanted to counter with a high kick but didn't throw it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." raises up his leg as if looking to counter with a high kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." shapes to counter with a head kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is clearly looking to counter with head kicks.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." throws a fast counter high kick but ".$fighterA." manages to duck under it in time.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." moves out of the way of the counter high kick from".$fighterB.".";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." throws a big counter head kick but ".$fighterA." avoids it with no problem.";

[Bwang]

Fifth group:

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." feints a counter leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." was about to counter that last move with a leg kick but changes his mind.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." only half commits to the counter leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." appeared to try and counter that last move with a leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." flicks out a counter leg kick but ".$fighterA." steps away.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." backing away here, and ".$fighterB." unleashes a leg kick that just misses.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." tries a quick counter leg kick but ".$fighterA." is wise to it.";

[Bwang]

Sixth group:

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." counters with a body kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." steps in looking to counter with the mid kick but it doesn't connect.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is trying to counter with his kicks.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." thinks about the counter body kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." follows through with a counter body kick but it doesn't land.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." replies with a solid counter kick to the body but ".$fighterA." blocks it well.";
$commentary .= "<br/>And ".$fighterB." responds with a good body kick, but ".$fighterA." manages to step out the way in time.";

[Bwang]

Seventh group:

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." tries to counter by closing the distance.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." wants to counter the offense by ".$fighterA." and move into the clinch position.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is trying to avoid his opponent's strikes and get into the clinch.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." steps in looking to clinch after the strikes miss from ".$fighterA.".";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." wants to counter with a clinch but ".$fighterA." pushes him away.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." sets himself, and ".$fighterB." steps forward looking for the clinch! ".$fighterA." avoids it this time.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." tries to counter with a clinch but ".$fighterA." shakes him off and moves away.";

[Bwang]

Eighth group:

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." feints the counter takedown.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is definitely looking for the counter takedowns here.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." changes levels for a counter takedown but doesn't follow through with his attempt.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." tries a counter takedown but it's more of a dummy move, and he uses it to push himself away.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." drops down looking to force a counter takedown but ".$fighterA." defends it well.";
$commentary .= "<br/>"And .$fighterB." tries to counter it with a takedown but ".$fighterA." pushes his down on his head and steps out.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." with the counter takedown but ".$fighterA." avoids it easily.";

[wirbelschwein]

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." counters with a haymaker to nowhere. A lot of hot air going on down there.";

[Silverspoon1996]

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looking for the counter but is out of range.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looked to counter with the hook but just pivots away.";

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." just missed with the big right hand as he avoids his opponent.";

$commentary .= "<br/>That straight right counter by ".$fighterB." just misses his opponent.";

$commentary .= "<br/>It looks like ".$fighterB." is trying to land the counter punch.";
$commentary .= "<br/> A fake left hand counter by ".$fighterB.". and he just steps away and resets himself.";
$commentary .= "<br/>Right hand counter from".$fighterB." almost got through but ".$fighterA." stays out of range.";

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looks like he is trying to counter with a liver shot.";
$commentary .= "<br/>Looks like".$fighterB." was trying to punish the body countering ".$fighterA.". attack";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." Counters with a liver shot but missed the mark and got air.";
$commentary .= "<br/>Nice side step by ".$fighterB." but whiffs throwing the counter to the ribs.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." had to see his opponents body was wide open for counter.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." was just out of range to land that counter to his opponents body.";
$commentary .= "<br/> The counter left hand to the body from ".$fighterB." was just off target.";

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is waiting for that one big counter.";
$commentary .= "<br/>It looked like ".$fighterB." eyes lit up after his opponent came forward but just couldnt pull off the counter attack there.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is looking to set up a counter combo.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is really looking to end this with one big counter.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." swung and missed with multiple strikes while trying to counter.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." throws a big counter combination but ".$fighterB." stays just out of range and avoids damage.";
$commentary .= "<br/> As ".$fighterA." looks to move away, ".$fighterB." throws a big counter combo but ".$fighterA." just gets out of the way.";

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looking for the high kick counter but can't pull the trigger.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is faking countering with a high kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." had too see the counter head kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looks like he may counter with head kicks.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." throws the counter high kick but ".$fighterA." just gets out of range.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." just manages to avoid a counter high kick from".$fighterB.".";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." throws a quick counter head kick but ".$fighterA." was just out of range.";

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." feinted there with a counter leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." looked to counter that last move with a leg kick but didn't pull the trigger.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." half committed to a counter leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." appeared to be looking to counter that last move with a leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." tried to counter with a leg kick but ".$fighterB." avoided it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>As ".$fighterA." backs away, ".$fighterB." returns fire with a leg kick that just misses.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." fires out a quick counter leg kick but ".$fighterA." just manages to avoid it.";

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is looking to counter with a body kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." jinks towards his opponent looking like he wants to counter with a mid kick but doesn't commit.";
$commentary .= "<br/>It appears ".$fighterB." was looking to counter with a kick there.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." thinks about countering with a body kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." quickly followed up with a counter body kick but doesn't connect.";
***$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." throws a quick counter kick to the body but ".$fighterA." avoids it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>And ".$fighterB." counters with a quick kick to the body but ".$fighterA." blocks it.";

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." seemed to be looking to counter by closing the distance.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is looking to counter the offense by ".$fighterA." and move into the clinch.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." wants to take advantage of his opponent's missed offense by moving into the clinch.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." is trying to close the distance and clinch up, after that failed offence from ".$fighterA.".";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." tries to counter by moving into the clinch but ".$fighterA." manages to circle out of the way.";
$commentary .= "<br/>As ".$fighterA." tries to get set, ".$fighterB." tries to push him back and clinch up but ".$fighterA." manages to avoid the attempt.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." tries to counter by clinching up but ".$fighterA." breaks away and moves out of range.";

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." feinted with a counter takedown.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." appears to be looking for a counter takedown.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." changes levels looking for a counter takedown but doesn't commit.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." half commits to a counter takedown before pushing away, out of range.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." drops down looking for a counter takedown but ".$fighterA." sprawls and moves away.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." tries to counter with a takedown but ".$fighterA." is quick to defend against it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." attempts a counter takedown but ".$fighterA." avoids it well and moves away.";

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got 3/4 way thought and got tired.. did change all the A's and B's.