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MMATycoon

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Hi Mike, I hope all is well. I'll rephrase the vocabulary only and I'll see if you like the style. Are you looking for laymen's terms or the occasional "college word"?

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All right Mike, here's what I have. "College" words are words that aren't as commonly used, such as ubiquitous, surreptitiously, exacerbated, etc. I didn't use anything of that nature so it's all good:

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." contemplated countering that move with a punch but withheld at the last moment";
$commentary .= "<br/>It looked like ".$fighterA." wanted to unleash a hook to counter but looked for a different opportunity.";

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." unloaded with a counter right hand that just missed its target.";

 

$commentary .= "<br/>An attempted straight right counter from ".$fighterA." misses the mark.";

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." looks to use counter punches.";
$commentary .= "<br/> A slightly feinted left hand from ".$fighterA." on the counter but he doesn't fully commit.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." launches a counter right hand but ".$fighterB." manages to avoid it.";

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." searches for a counter punch to the body.";
$commentary .= "<br/>It looked like ".$fighterA." was trying to counter with a body shot as a reaction to that last attack from ".$fighterB.".";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." swung with an attempted counter punch to the body but it didn't connect.";
$commentary .= "<br/>A quick step to the side and ".$fighterA." misses the counter to the body.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." looks to counter with a shot to the body.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." began to counter that last move with a shot to the body but retracted.";
$commentary .= "<br/> A counter left hand to the body from ".$fighterA." Is off target.";

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." Is looking for a massive counter strike.";
$commentary .= "<br/>It looked like ".$fighterA." was looking amped, ready to hurl a tremendous counter but restrained himself.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." works to land a counter combo.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." appears to chamber his punches with his muscles tensed, looking for a big counter.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." threw caution to the wind there, looking for a momentum-changing combo counter, but missed the entire flurry.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." throws a mammoth counter combination but ".$fighterB." scrambles out of danger and avoids any damage.";
$commentary .= "<br/> As ".$fighterB." looks to step back, ".$fighterA." throws an immense counter combo, but ".$fighterB." barely avoids being nailed.";

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." looked to counter with a face kick but opted for better positioning.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." raises his leg, appearing to look to counter with a face kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." contemplates countering with a head kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." tries to position himself to counter with head kicks.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." throws a counter face kick but ".$fighterB." had just enough where-with-all to dodge it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." ever so slightly manages to avoid a counter face kick from".$fighterB.".";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." throws a rapid counter head kick but ".$fighterB." was just out of range.";

 

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." feinted with a counter leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." desired to counter that last move with a leg kick but opted to wait for another moment.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." half committed to a counter leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." showed the intent of countering that last move with a leg kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." tried to counter with a leg kick but ".$fighterB." avoided it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>As ".$fighterB." withdraws, ".$fighterA." reacts by returning fire with a leg kick that just misses.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." fires out a quick counter leg kick but ".$fighterB." just manages to avoid it.";

 

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." is looking to counter with a body kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." darts towards his opponent looking like he wants to counter with a mid-kick, but repositions himself.";
$commentary .= "<br/>It appears ".$fighterA." was looking to counter with a kick there.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." considers countering with a body kick.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." immediately launched a counter body kick but doesn't connect.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterB." launches a quick counter kick to the body but ".$fighterB." avoids it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>And ".$fighterA." counters with a quick body kick but ".$fighterB." blocks it with his arm.";

 

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." closed the distance, appearing to look for a counter attack in closer range.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." is looking to counter the attack by ".$fighterB." and locks him into a clinch.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." wants to be opportunistic of his opponent's missed attack by forcing him into a clinch.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." attempts to close the distance and get into a clinch after that failed attack from ".$fighterB.".";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." looks to counter by moving into the clinch but ".$fighterB." manages to circle out of the way.";
$commentary .= "<br/>As ".$fighterB." tries to get set, ".$fighterA." rushes him in an attempt to push him back and clinch up, but ".$fighterB." manages to avoid it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." looks to counter by clinching up but ".$fighterB." pushes him back and moves out of range.";

 

 

 

$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." feinted with a counter takedown.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." changes position and appears to look for a counter takedown.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." changes levels while looking for a counter takedown, but stands back up.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." half commits to a counter takedown before pushing himself back and out of range.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." drops down while looking for a counter takedown, but ".$fighterB." sprawls, stifles the attempted takedown and moves away.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." tries to counter with a takedown but ".$fighterB." reacts very quickly and defends against it.";
$commentary .= "<br/>".$fighterA." attempts a counter takedown but ".$fighterB." avoids it well and easily averts danger.";

 

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You're welcome Mike. I wasn't sure if you wanted shortened or lengthened statements but hopefully you'll like what has been submitted by those who participated and all turns out the way you'd like it to be :)

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