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MMATycoon Court: Karter vs Camara


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  1. 1. Does Karter owe Camara 5 mil?

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marinate your cerrebellum, while yo lady put her hair up/

I'm at yo colon like semi

I was reading and "Ok so far, yeah, just a generic rap", but then

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It's Camp Camaras era, I bet none of you would square up/

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The point is any alliance can pick there best restricted fighters at certain weights at likely have an advantage over another. 340k fighters are pretty much open ID at this point anyway so open it up I say.

 

Convicted has some of the absolute best 340k`s in the game.

 

They might belong to 1 or 2 managers but they have lots of talent in their rosters.

 

340k is not unlimited. 330k yeah the fast learners but 340k is not. Those few hundred skill points matter a ton in these challenges, you and I know that.

 

If Crassus wants to collide against the bros let`s do this I say !

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Come talkin' that trash, get waxed, like it's swim season/

I'm on that ass, get tapped, leavin' lips bleadin,/

My rims clean, n my chick schemin, I'm six speedin',/

never been decent, I been creepin, assist demons,/

with sick things, that you can't dream up, some sick feelings,/

in my head, I can't rest, I sit n my necks reelin,/

my wrist gleamin, with every step, I rip cement/

Come around me leave ya body wrecked in six pieces./

 

It's Camp Camaras era, I bet none of you would square up/

marinate your cerrebellum, while yo lady put her hair up/

she give me top, than put her derriere up in the air, yup/

just had to let y'all know in case you were not aware of,/

 

the way we get's busy,

throwin' bows on the really,/

I'm on my toes like it's tippy,

knock ya nose off, ya sniff me?/

I talk that big shit you skinny,

I'm at yo colon like semi,/

I'm bout to go in don't tempt me,

you just blow smoke like a chimneys,/

 

 

A random full 16 bar rap verse. lmao wrote it quick cause my laptop dying and I need a new charger, this one only charges when the laptop off. might be the battery. idk.

not perfect but if anybody knows anything about rhyme schemes and syllable rhyming they should appreciate it.

 

Amazing :)

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Come talkin' that trash, get waxed, like it's swim season/

I'm on that ass, get tapped, leavin' lips bleadin,/

My rims clean, n my chick schemin, I'm six speedin',/

never been decent, I been creepin, assist demons,/

with sick things, that you can't dream up, some sick feelings,/

in my head, I can't rest, I sit n my necks reelin,/

my wrist gleamin, with every step, I rip cement/

Come around me leave ya body wrecked in six pieces./

 

It's Camp Camaras era, I bet none of you would square up/

marinate your cerrebellum, while yo lady put her hair up/

she give me top, than put her derriere up in the air, yup/

just had to let y'all know in case you were not aware of,/

 

the way we get's busy,

throwin' bows on the really,/

I'm on my toes like it's tippy,

knock ya nose off, ya sniff me?/

I talk that big shit you skinny,

I'm at yo colon like semi,/

I'm bout to go in don't tempt me,

you just blow smoke like a chimneys,/

 

 

A random full 16 bar rap verse. lmao wrote it quick cause my laptop dying and I need a new charger, this one only charges when the laptop off. might be the battery. idk.

not perfect but if anybody knows anything about rhyme schemes and syllable rhyming they should appreciate it.

 

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just because I'm a good sport...

 

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Lil Savage, he might be a faggot
Talkin' bout my ass just might get his ass kicked
Kidnap his mom, golden shower in a cabin
Beat her with my wood till my dick goes flaccid
ayyyyyyy
let a real ninja at it
I see you on sight my aim is automatic
Better tip toe past me
Murder is a habit
Run up in ya crib and show you what a savage - like
yeah I live that life
put me in a cage and I'm still gon fight
stood in the paint and I beat life twice
put me in a movie I'm the bad guy type - like why?
"Why you live like that?"
I never had shit so why hold back
spoiled rich kids with a brand new bag
I took their shit and I don't feel bad
U Mad?
I'ma pull a Jacky Chan
Got the mod in my pocket
I'll never get a ban
there were a few more lines about Castor joining the clan or something like that but I butchered it so this is all I got for lil savage today lol
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In music usually silence (rests) speaks more than spamming notes. Its what gives the groove.

 

Thats not different in rap. Fitting inside the 4/4 time meter and putting rests, putting more dynamic into the strong beat...

 


(at 4:26 you can hear a less melodic and more rap "just talking with some whatever background", but it still fits the 4/4 and he always marks the 1st beat of each bar)

 

(This has no rests, but he gives the groove with dynamics and marking the strong beat of each bar)

 

Just ranting, I know this has been said before and you guys dont give a fuck, its just a 4f RP... But some background metronome would improve this 1000% without much effort

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In music usually silence (rests) speaks more than spamming notes. Its what gives the groove.

 

 

Thats not different in rap. Fitting inside the 4/4 time meter and putting rests, putting more dynamic into the strong beat...

 

(at 4:26 you can hear a less melodic and more rap "just talking with some whatever background", but it still fits the 4/4 and he always marks the 1st beat of each bar)

 

(This has no rests, but he gives the groove with dynamics and marking the strong beat of each bar)

 

Just ranting, I know this has been said before and you guys dont give a fuck, its just a 4f RP... But some background metronome would improve this 1000% without much effort

Gangsters Paradise / Rap God took them 100+ hours to create... minimum.. and collaboration of a large group of people working together.

 

I recorded that and uploaded (slow browser speed) in less than 5 minutes while taking a shit lol and tbh idk what metronome is without google.

 

Professional Rappers vs Professional Slacker

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Production took them that. I'm pretty much sure sticking to beat rythm didnt.

 

I used to practice without metronome when beginning at guitar, totally regret that. Took me a lot of effort later on with metronome and scales exercises

 

 

 

tbh idk what metronome is without google.


Well that sums it up

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Everyone hating on Savage but still better than what Camara came up with (nothing)

 

:tumbleweed:

Wasnt hating on any of them, just giving constructive criticism/positive feedback (that actually fits both)

 

I do like how you just spit that spice tho :thumbup:

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Everyone hating on Savage but still better than what Camara came up with (nothing)

 

:tumbleweed:

 

I don`t think anyone is hating on Lil Savage :)

 

My crew of POWERFUL frens keeps getting larger. With Savage we have a legit rapper / recording artist.

 

Still waiting on Blake to drop his latest hit !

 

Oh and remember: Plesae wear your masks :)

 

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I don`t think anyone is hating on Lil Savage :)

 

My crew of POWERFUL frens keeps getting larger. With Savage we have a legit rapper / recording artist.

 

Still waiting on Blake to drop his latest hit !

 

Oh and remember: Plesae wear your masks :)

 

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Wack, always looking for your bum buddies to come help you out of shitty situations you put yourself in.

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Wack, always looking for your bum buddies to come help you out of shitty situations you put yourself in.

 

Well you cannot blame me, it has worked so far.

 

It pays off being nice and helping people, the whole "Pay it Forward" thing that was introduced back in the 90`s it didn`t take me decades to master, it didn`t require a Pandemic.

 

Now I`m able to pull it off while being the REALEST.

 

Around here I`m basically "Popeye" minus the rapey rapey stuff; taking care of the new guys (and yes YOU ARE TE BLACK TRANNY HAHAHAHAHA):

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUmHcQdmFTU

 

Now fack off !

 

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Chris Karter and Kamara both owes The Castorizer 2.000.000 plus interest.

 

It is highly recommended that these gentlemen do the wise choice and pay immediately otherwise they must suffer the consequences.

 

Both been begging me to give them a little bit extra time, do not test Castors patience.

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Seriously though (since Jordan is waiting) , do you publicly decline to fulfill our 5th fight on the bet?

 

Don`t worry man, it cannot look bad on you based on what Fury (was it Fury) already revealed about your character.

 

Nothing you can do in game can be worst than having 0 honour in real life HAHAHAHA

 

If you gonna CON your way out of this bet you might as well just admit it now HAHAHAHA

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